You've pretty much hit the method that I use for tarp guy out lines. I personally don't think it can be improved upon much. I use a continuous tarp ridgeline, with prussics for tarp adjustment horizontally. Your two line method works on the exact same principle.
Good work. I don't think you need to change a thing.
Good judgment comes from experience, and often experience comes from bad judgment. - Unknown
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